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“...No one would miss me...”

“Thats not true!....I would.”

Footsteps continued to echo through the ally.

“DAMMIT! Do you hear me Roxas!?! I WOULD! I WOULD MISS YOU!!”  

It was rare...to hear such a desperate tone in Axel's voice, so pleading, so weak, it made the other freeze, liquid ice poured through his veins, making his body shutter, and it made him feel sick.

“...Don't...” Fists clenched tightly, blue eyes squeezed shut, and his body trembled.

“...Don't say things like that to me...You wouldn't miss me, you couldn't. We have no hearts...”

Bright emerald green eyes were pleading, hoping, begging....

“....I would....I would miss you.”

“No. You wouldn't.”

“I'd miss you.”

“Liar.”

“I'd miss you.”

“Stop it.”

“I would.”

“Axel, stop it.”

“I'd miss you, Roxas.”

“Shut up!”

“I'd miss you so much....”

“SHUT UP!!”

They fought, they fought for pain, they fought for anger, they fought for each other, but most of all, they fought for the love that, deep down, they knew they couldn't feel.

Each blow they landed  made something in their chests clench, but they didn't stop, they couldn't. Time seemed to stop around them, nothing else existed, nothing else mattered, all that mattered, was the harsh clash of weapons, the grunts of exhaustion, and the blood pouring from their wounds.

Only when their weapons became too heavy to hold, only when their bodies were all bled out, only when they were on the bring of fading away, did they finally stop.

The blonde, however, was victorious, and his lover, his friend, was laying on the ground, panting and bleeding, from the wounds he inflicted on the person he claimed to love the most. Blue eyes rested on the others body, until he tore them away from the sight, and turned around.

“...Don't get up.” He whispered,

“It's over.”

With those words said Roxas started walking away, trying not to limp, trying not to focas on his own bleeding wounds.

“Roxas.”

For the second time that night, he froze,  despite the fact that flames continued to roar around him, he felt like ice as he turned around to face the older nobody.

Axel gripped unto his shoulders softly, trying to keep his balance, blood running down his forehead, unto his temple. His shaking form slouched over, as though he was about to fall, and Roxas automatically gripped unto his sleeve with one hand, the other holding Axel's shoulder, keeping him in place.

He couldn't do it...He couldn't bring himself to make eye contact with the redhead, guilt filled eyes just stared at the others bleeding, and quivering form...

“Why wont you let me go?” The blonde whispered horsely, brokenly...

He could feel Axel's grip on him tighten.

“...Because I can't.”
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OMG! This took forever!! @_@ But it was worth it!! I wrote this fic after I saw this beautiful fanart done by *Nijuuni

It's called AkuRoku-Let me go.

Here's the link [link]

I seriously suggest you check it out. It's sooo goooddd *Sparkly eyes* XD

Also, when I told her I wanted to write a fanfic on it, she was really excited...PRESSURE!! @_@

I must have re-wrote this about a MILLION damn times. @_______@ But it was WORTH IT DAMNIT!! XDXDXD

So, *Nijuuni, I seriously hope you like this, I slaved over it for hours. XD And be honest if you don't like it!!!

**EDIT**

HOLY FUCK!!! O_O OVER 4,000 VIEWS!!! AND OVER 200 FAVS!!!!!!!!! :iconfuckyeahplz: I LOVE YOU ALL!!!!!!
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There are a few typos here. I personally found the stream of short dialogue at the beginning a little misguiding, but holy shit, my heart wrenched at the end.
I'm so flattered; I love this :heart: btw how did you get the italics working?!

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I'm gonna eat you up like a strawberry pocky.
Omg! ^__^ Thank you!! For italics, you just have to do this > i < (Just get rid of the spaces) >i< see?

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[link] ...Axel, you sound like a pedo.

"The power of accurate observation is frequently called cynicism by those who don't have it."
No wait, it's < i > Yeah It's < i >okay good.

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[link] ...Axel, you sound like a pedo.

"The power of accurate observation is frequently called cynicism by those who don't have it."
wow, just wow, I thought this was great, you actually got me crying at the end. *wipes at eyes* congradulations on finishing this, I think it came out nicely. *nod*
*favs*

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~Elgie-Chan ;P

-I\'m oblivious to the obvious

-98% of teens have tried or smoked pot before. Put this in your signature if you like man sex.
Wow... that is so heartwrenching... I loved every minute of it... Amazing job.

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Turn off your mind, relax, and float downstream.
/dies

Omg, that was so beautiful it almost moved me to tears! Goes with the picture so perfectly ;-;...

:+fav:

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"I'm a coward, not a fighter; disguised as a lover."
This is really pretty! This goes along with the picture perfectly!

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Dress in Drag and do the HULA! ~<3

Roxas is not Gay...He's just Axelsexual!
aww
this is so awesome!
great job!
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they don't love you like I love you
Omg, really!?!? @_@ I made you cry!?! YAY! XD Well, you get what I mean, thanks so much for the fav! And I'm glad you liked it!

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[link] ...Axel, you sound like a pedo.

"The power of accurate observation is frequently called cynicism by those who don't have it."
Thanks so much! ^___^

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[link] ...Axel, you sound like a pedo.

"The power of accurate observation is frequently called cynicism by those who don't have it."

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